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Watch the circus freak,
Smiling for the crowds.
Always crying inside,
But never aloud.

What would happen
If he shared his woes?
He would be locked away forever,
And would not continue shows.
©2007-2010 ~Zombiebrenny
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Yeah, I know it's short. Sometimes things are best when they're not stretched to the inth degree.

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:icontimmyhorton:
That's deep.

And I thought you left DEVERANTARTS =O

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:iconpuwen:
I agree with your comments.

It's interesting; clowns so often wear masks and makeup to the world. This can be broadened to global scale; hundreds of people hiding.
And clowns are supposed to be happy so we put our hopes on them to cheer us up.

Well done; very thought provoking.

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:iconmrwally:
Short works, and it works well here. Good stuff.

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"When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro."- Hunter S. Thompson

"Your birth is a mistake you'll spend your whole life trying to correct." - Chuck Palahniuk
:iconzombiebrenny:
Nah, just havent felt like writing much lately.

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:iconzombiebrenny:
I also find that everyone seems to assume that clowns don't have troubles of their own, so when they finally say something everyone's shocked and they seem to resent them for actually having their own issues.

I'm really glad you like it though, thanks alot.

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:iconzombiebrenny:
Thanks man. I wasn't so sure, but I also didn't want to try and stretch it just for the sake of it.

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:iconkayluhh:
OH MY GOD BRENNY SUBMITTED SOMMMMETHING.
Now I can comment something of yours (: <3
:iconzombiebrenny:
lolk ;DD

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